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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-02-18 02:03 PM


Where would I find a more
perfect face? Angel's wings
support your walk. Long silky
curls dance a waltz around you.
Your gaze profoundly attract
other eyes and suspend them.
A true feeling of new peace, found
when you embrace them. Where perfection
now stands still, in a pedestal of
flesh. In your innocence there lies
the effect you bring about.

This poem was inspired by She walks in beauty, like the night by George Gordon, Lord Byron.



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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-02-18 02:36 PM


Yes...yes...
this is a perfect read, my friend...
Lord Byron would be very pleased, I believe!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-02-18 02:44 PM


Beautifully written. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-02-18 03:53 PM


this is excellent and I love every word of it...*s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
4 posted 2001-02-18 04:17 PM


Thaks for yor time. Is appreciated.
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