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Spring in the Air
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Spring in the Air |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Spring in the air Butterflies, flowers and afternoon tea That and the sound of the lap of the sea You in a chair and the scent of the air I in a glare at the sight of you there. Those eyes that wink like a butterflies wings A voice like flowers that airs in the spring The sip of exotic raspberry tea All that and more at the edge of the sea. What could be sweeter or nicer more braw Then you and your essence, me in rapport A day in the sun like the warmth of a dream Listening to rhyme and the scheme of new theme. I see it in signs the end of the cold The coming of spring beginning of bold. The downing of strife the sound of a fife The show of crocus, beginning new life. The sign of a dragon shaking his head A randy dragon that thought he was dead. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Seymour, sounds like some Butterfly is in serious trouble in the heart department. Boy, I hope the flight patterns are in sync. Hugs, ME |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Butterflies, flowers and afternoon tea That and the sound of the lap of the sea You in a chair and the scent of the air I in a glare at the sight of you there. Those eyes that wink like a butterflies wings A voice like flowers that airs in the spring The sip of exotic raspberry tea All that and more at the edge of the sea. ===================== A day in the sun like the warmth of a dream Listening to rhyme and the scheme of new theme. I see it in signs the end of the cold The coming of spring beginning of bold. ===================== The sign of a dragon shaking his head A randy dragon that thought he was dead. ===================== OH MY ... OH SY ... oh *sigh* me thinks you've taken the words from a butterfly........  ~Butterfly in search of Spring~  ~Butterfly on a rainbow~ *winkiewinkie* I knew we shouldnt have let randy get in the raspberry tea  *L*and Sy ... this poem is definatly a groovy  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Your imagery sweeps me into pleasant thoughts. A pleasure to read. Poeminister "The soul can split the sky in two, And let the face of God shine through." ~Millay |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb Sy. . . Spring will be here soon. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mother, I hope so too, that is the sync of humor. JM, I don't know how he did it but Randy got out again and used my computer and I noticed the raspberry concentrate is down quite a bit. I can see he's been nipping at it. But how can you be mad at him. When I read the poem I had to laugh myself. WW S Poeminister, Thanks for the nice comment. Sven, Your right and spring is just around the corner. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Rasberry tea by the sea.....I'm on my way!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hey Seymour, smooth writing....a superb poem...peace! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Seymour what a beautiful flow this has to it....and the wonderful romance of nature entwined throughout is what makes it sing to me as I read it....love it very much! Always a joy to read the beauty of your work with it's subtle undercurrents.... great stuff !! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spring has sprung...Randy is wrung! Long live Randy Dragon... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I'm ready for SPRING!!!!! A nice tall glass of ice tea. Can't wait. Send it on  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, OK I'll save you some tea. *L* Nate, Smooth comment thanks. Ethome, You sure know how to comp a guy, thanks. Sunshine, Randy Dragon thanks you. *L* into2B, It's on its way, thank you much. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Just lovely - and now I can imagine you reading it having heard your voice yay bounce! I am ever found of butterflies...aligned with JM... Hugs Sy  K |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
pardon moi ... but I must have been so sprung on the coming of spring that I forgot to put this in me library and I MUST have this in my butterfly collection ( I swear I checked that box) must have had a senior moment *L* *winkiewinkie* Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, I love this, I'm with Janet Marie, I must add this to my butterfly collection too The imagery and sentiment in this poem is awesome!Take care, Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, you flatter me, but I love it. *L* JM, You mean your going to pin me in a glass box and hang me on the wall. LOL Winkiewinkie Stinky Malissa, Since I think you are one of the best I am very flattered. |
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