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Between You And ME
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Between You And ME |
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Love_is_Pain Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 16 |
Him: Why do we have to stop it so fast? Her: Because I don't think it would last. Him: If you thought this before, Why didn't you tell me? Her: If I would have told you, we wouldn't of traveled the seven sea's. Him: The seven seas were fun, But the love was not yet done. Her: The love that's there, Is only a thing called lust. Him: What I feel is a thing called love, And that won't just disapear. Her: I am sorry that I hurt you, But I don't feel the same. Him: Then maybe you, Should have told me that, Before we spent, That Saturday in the rain. Her: I told you I love you. And that maid me feel like crap, But there's nothing, Else that I could say. Him: You could of said, You loved me not, And saved me, The extra pain. Her: I am really sorry, For we will be not, Please don't hate me, Because I aslo have the Pain. This one is one of the toughest I have wrote yet...I like it, what do you all think? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thought it said a lot in a short conversational piece...love can be painful... but also can be so rewarding, comforting and enjoyable... thank you for your response to my treasure boxed in life...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Love-is-pain, I liked this, loving someone can be bitter sweet, great job here, enjoyed the reading and also welcome to Passions hope you are enjoying your stay. Love, Cerenity |
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