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This night
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This night |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This night is good for romance. Sit next to me my dear and tell me, who do you revere? Tell me the things that I want to hear. So hold me, don't let me go, my passion cannot be ignored. Take me to that place, where we are once again, promising true love, at no one's expense. This night is good for romance. Is warm, the moon is out. Our bodies will culminate this love, again and again. Kiss me,my love. Touch me, my love. My love is yours, once more. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Deeply romantic and passionate...excellent expression of the intimacy and warmth of love...I really enjoyed this very much! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow, Communication and intimacy in one write. Very well written. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Walker* This piece had a soothing...melodic feel to it...I enjoyed it very much..great work~ you walk before me, Lord knows I can’t follow you walk behind me and I don’t think I can lead you walk around me, please don’t walk around me "D |
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