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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-02-18 12:47 PM


Why is it, us guys
Well most guys
I don’t wanna be too general
(Commander is more my rank!!!)
stand before the mirror
with an expression
seeming blank

admiration in our eyes
upon looking at our mugs
we’ve grown a little stubble
and now we look like thugs

hey tough guy your looking
kinda good
why don’t you come on over
and see me some time

I really like that fuzzy
smallish face
Be sure to wear dirty clothes
And smear on some grime

I don’t know about you guys
But I’m the Fonz
Never used no Biore
Or dipped my face with Ponds

I don’t know about you guys
But goatees
Are shirts for a goat
I’m just happy when I get
A lil scruff
growin on my throat

han solo was a scruffy lookin nerf herder
who you calling scruffy looking no not me
I’m don juan chocolate milk drinking sweetheart
The one you fell in love with from Miami V






[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-18-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-02-18 12:54 PM


Wish you could see me shaking my head here... and YES I know what a Biore is...sigh..Walt, Walt, Walt. Tis a cutie.. the poem that is.
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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2 posted 2001-02-18 01:10 AM


Walt don't worry someday when you get older you will grow more than just a little scruff on your face. I always liked the Fonz, he was one kool dude!!!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-02-18 07:29 AM


ROTFLMBO....love early morning Sunday giggles....
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-02-18 07:36 AM


Huh! I'll take my choclate milk in a DIRTY glass!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2001-02-18 07:42 AM


WoW,
Well you guy, you! ROFL.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-02-18 08:39 AM


LOL ... much enjoyed Walt!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven
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7 posted 2001-02-18 02:24 PM


I'll take my chocolate milk shaken not stirred. . .  

and. . . what's wrong with goatees???  


LOL   great one Walt!!!

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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
8 posted 2001-02-18 03:18 PM


thanks for reading, you guys
Corazon
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9 posted 2001-02-19 03:32 PM


love this........rofg........i should send this to my son......rofg
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2001-02-19 03:49 PM


Very interesting...James
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