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Dear Heart
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Dear Heart |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Dear heart how are things today I feel you inside of me beating But it doesn't feel the same I thought last night I heard you weeping Do not weep heart of mine Tomorrow might be a brighter day I know why your heavy though You want to speak...but your words were stolen away You were not a fool No crime did you commit Only loved real and true Your best you did submit Now the feelings inside of you Leave me so confused I twist and turn all night long Unsure as to what to do I know you don't love her the same Yet love still lives within Rays of sunshine want to find you But you aren't sure where to begin Now you fear what you feel for another I know you do not trust heart of mine But be patient And again, love you may find...in time Hold onto the dream It lives within the heartbeat of me Casting eyes heavenward I pray ever so silently "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Pray loud sweetie!! Let everyone hear.........This is fantastic!!  SEA |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
No, you were not a fool! That's right. These things grab us and take hold of our greatest vulmnerabilities...then leave us to sort it all out and still maintain some degree of sanity. I am glad your heart is still with you, though...mine I have had to let go for awhile. Once again----Well said! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Dear heart how are things today I feel you inside of me beating But it doesn't feel the same I thought last night I heard you weeping Do not weep heart of mine Tomorrow might be a brighter day I know why your heavy though You want to speak...but your words were stolen away You were not a fool No crime did you commit Only loved real and true Your best you did submit' Aims...this is beautiful. Especially 'your best you did submit...' Very true words there, girlie! Wonderfully expressed, my friend! -e ~~~~~~  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know why your heavy though You want to speak...but your words were stolen away =================== seems to me the words are flowing and healing at the same time... beautiful sincere write Am... the light and truth is shining in every verse love the soft spoken theme of this... the conversation with your heart well done sweets   meAs sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
email me? |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Very nice, but bittersweet. So sad, yet hopeful. The conflicting feelings show. Hearts are finicky creatures, no? Beautiful writing. Much love, ~Krissie "And I wanted you to turn away. You don't remember, but I do. You never even tried..." ~Fuel |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Very nice, but bittersweet. So sad, yet hopeful. The conflicting feelings show. Hearts are finicky creatures, no? Beautiful writing. Much love, ~Krissie "And I wanted you to turn away. You don't remember, but I do. You never even tried..." ~Fuel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Dear Amy, things are good today I know that you wonder about me I know that things don't feel the same But just follow me, I know the way. . . Amy, never let go of the dream. . . dream it with every part of your being and your heart. . . hold it close to you. . . and never, ever, let it die. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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