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I Am Yours
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I Am Yours |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I Am Yours Reach into the night and feel me there I am the heat and the flames you share The caress of fire that beckons you on The kiss of desire, the face of the sun I am your dream that you want so much I am nirvana the blessed longed for touch Stretch out with your hands and feel me I am the misty dream that sets you free I lift you up and away you then soar The blessed release that urge for more I am the hope that is there in your sigh I am the wonder that makes you softly cry Hold out your arms and whisper come I am the answer to your hearts sum I am the beginning of your path to you The way for you to work it all through I am the peace that you endlessly seek I am your base rock and I’m your peak Speak my name and I will fly to you I am the one who will be forever true I am the star that you must aim for I am the desire that burns for evermore I am the entrance the opening of doors I am the hope you dream and I am yours Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Marsha, this is so moving. You have covered so many aspects of the feeling of being loved. I hope that this was written for someone special. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
YES!!!!!!!!  Beautifully done Marsha....I loved how this all flows together so perfectly! -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one Marsha. . . it just flows like a river of love. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marsha, The only thing I can think of to say is .. beautiful and touching |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Big sis!! This is fantastic...I just love your style, girl!! You grabbed me with the line: "I am the beginning of your path to you"!!! Oh, yes...and how often do we find ourselves when we look into our lover's eyes? Beautiful write!!!  (My only suggestion is to myself....that I take more time out to read your wonderful thoughts!!)Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ This is so romantically giving ... it fits you well. Thank you for sharing such lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
~You express yourself in such a way that a person must read your poem~ it not only gets you attention but holds it by the way it flows |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Same to ya, Marsha!!  this is very beautiful.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so openly honest and unselfish Mushy....I really think you did an exceptional job on this piece Marsha...I can't say enough! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, Again and again you surprise and amaze me with your poetry, and this is no exception. It flows in a wonderfully fluid way. Beautiful! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy the read |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
inot2B love, thank you truly, well I think he may be special, but then my judgement just lately has been a little out of alignment. Let's just say I hope so. Take care love as always Mushy Circe love, thank you as always you praise me and I really don't deserve it. But I thank you for your eternally giving heart Take care love always Mushy AD dear heart, thank you very much, it was supposed to flow, and I'm pleased the feelings of love come through. I hoped they would. Thank you for lots of things, but mainly because of you and always find something nice to say. Take care AD love as always Bubbles Rosepetals, thank you so very very much, it is most appreciated Take care love Mushy lil sis, thank you sweetie, thank you muchly always Take care love as always Bubbles Margie girl, always YOU say the sweetest things and I know I don't deserve them, and I love you for being there with encouragement anyway. Take care love as always Mushy Voiceless, thank you so very very much, I do truly appreciate it always I hope to see some of your work soon I'm sure it will be wonderful. Take care love Mushy 'Deer dear heart, what can I say, apart from thank you love. (I don't know why I try for brevity, the less is more thing I know it works, but you are a master at it, so perhaps I'll give it up. ) Now you just know I won't, don't you because if nothing else I always try. Don't you dare say yes you are very trying or I'll.... well I don't know what I'll do but it will have you quaking, probably with laughter but that is neither here nor there. Love you dear heart because you always raise a smileTake care love Bubbles PT dear heart thank you sweet poetry man, you too always try to find something positive and I love you always for it. That's me always honest, mostly, anyway thank you love, as long as I have my haven, my friends and poetry to help me fly what more do I need.Take care love as always Mushy Kethry dear heart, what now sis, shhh don't tell them you wrote this, they think I did. I've just been recieving compliments and stuff, they all like it tremendously. I've pulled it off wonderfully I thought, but they'll all know if you go popping up here. well you said I could borrow some odd words didn't you? Oh you didn't mean them to all come from the same work. Ahhh my mistake. Shhhhh, I'll make it up to you love, I'll let you do the very next challenge that comes my way. And that should keep you busy for a day or so. And don't say I don't ever give you anything, Love you dear heartTake care love and stuff Slushy Vandana, thank you truly, I'm pleased you enjoyed it Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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