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In The Moonlight, Shadows Dancing (repost challenge)
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In The Moonlight, Shadows Dancing (repost challenge) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In the moonlight shadows dancing Willows weep amid morning mist lovers sighing sounds entrancing sharing a farewell kiss In the daylight shadows resting While life goes on apace always seeking ways of testing faithfulness in each face In the noontime shadows sleeping Waiting for eventide when nightly secrets she’ll be keeping lovers lie together again In the moonlight shadows dancing Secret trysts again begin whispers taking lovers chancing to find a love again |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DEVine One, AW Geese. You melted me like a patty of butter. Lovely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the noontime shadows sleeping Waiting for eventide when nightly secrets she’ll be keeping lovers lie together again In the moonlight shadows dancing Secret trysts again begin whispers taking lovers chancing to find a love again ============== hey...way cool... you took this thru a full days cycle of shadows dancing ... what a creative and cool turn of the challenge.. I was hoping more reposts from this would pop up... great job Sharon .. and so romantic As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh isn't it wonderful when certain challenges rise again! Sharon, this is a wonderful present from you to us on your special day! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
It's great to see the romantic side of you, this is an excellent addition to the challenge, the rhyme and verse flows so smoothly, I love it~  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...seems so many of us were shadow dancing, I really loved that challange of Hoot owls...loved this one by you...and happy birthday to you! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this. Very well done. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sharon, This is so pretty, the imagery was great and I too want to wish you a very Happy Birthday, I hope you enjoyed it, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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