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Lost Light (2 part tanka)
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Lost Light (2 part tanka) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Lost Light The soft light that shines so bright in those dark green eyes, somehow went away leaving me here all alone wondering why it faded. My heart needs to know why your warm love turned so cold while the love I hold still burns with passion and want consuming my heart and soul [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* i know your going threw some hard times. but trust me things will work out. i know it  beautiful peice. it is my library *huggles*love ya jesse  True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Rosepetals(beautiful name, by the way) I feel your pain in your poem. I have been there, and am still there more often than not. Beautiful writing. Stay strong. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent tanka RP ... a perfect blending of rhyme, imagery and emotions. heart string playing write my friend ... expressed with sincerety take care sweet poetess... nice to find you here today As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful expression of such a painful feeling...excellent write, rosepetals! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jesse - Thank you for stopping in. Your friendship means so much.. you have helped more than you know. catalinamoon - First.. thank you for compliment on my name.. I have always loved roses. Second of all, thank you for stopping in. I am trying to stay strong.. however, that is easier said than done.Janet - Thank you  I appreciate the compliments! Everyone by now knows that I LOVEEEE tankas and haikus It's nice to know that don't do to bad of a job on them.. hehe  Thanks again.snowpants - I'm glad you liked it and that you took time to stop in |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosepetals, Wonderful poetry about a hard thing to deal with, I send hugs as well and hope you find your answers. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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