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desperado
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since 1999-05-24
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FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 2001-02-17 12:58 PM


the cold wind blows away my heart,
until the light of day.
through midnight storm and morning fog
I'll walk till I can stay
the soul I own will stay with me,
until my heart is free.
through countless days and nights I walked,
yet still no sun to see.
the cold wind blew and wailed at me
yet still I didn't fall
and then I saw the morning dawn
upon the sandy shores.
where once was darkness now is light
because I saw your face
and now the sun and the light shines down
upon my weary heart.
where shackles were now flesh remains
and bars did fade away


as I was walking down the road
I meet a man I knew
his heart was torn and soul was tattered
cause of what he knew
and tears fell down upon my face
as I heard his sorrow tale
from dawn to dusk he walked with her
and then her heart did fail
'twas cold and dark upon his face
a darkness locked in place
no lock to break no key to use,
just me and a mirror with you



"There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain. When I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could le

© Copyright 2001 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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1 posted 2001-02-17 01:54 PM


Now, why can't you talk to me like this when I'm actually at my computer Excellent job. I'll try and think of a title for ya love.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."


[This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 02-17-2001).]

menage a demideux
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since 2000-05-11
Posts 32

2 posted 2001-02-17 02:39 PM


quote:
and then I saw the morning dawn
upon the sandy shores.
where once was darkness now is light
because I saw your face


.... if this is written from fact not fiction, you are indeed a very lucky man......

(she says, waiting for light to break the darkness)

(((hug)))

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