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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-02-16 04:20 PM


We've been here a short while
But in the infinite scheme
We've done it all, my friend

We've been down the road
The uphill battle
Faced the fear of unknown worlds
And swerved before the cattle

There were times when I said
The road is getting slight
Upon the next fork that we see
I think I'll take a right

And when I miss my exit
You smile and we keep going
Nothing can e'er be kept from you
Now that's a friendship growing




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-17-2001).]

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Celeste
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1 posted 2001-02-16 05:10 PM


"And when I miss my exit
you smile and we keep going"

I loved that! So very true of life. Excellent!

To capture and live a moment is truly living


ethome
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2 posted 2001-02-16 05:10 PM


And well it shouldn't be ...don't swerve too severely you might crash....but seriously this is a very good read ...well done Walt!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

lostinspace
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3 posted 2001-02-16 06:14 PM


This is cool! Hey, my brothers name is Walt. Nice to meet ya.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2001-02-16 06:37 PM


I like this walt! There's a lesson in this one!
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-02-16 06:47 PM


Wonderfully written Walt! I loved the "exit" line as well, so much truth in that ... lucky is the person to have a friendship this dear, nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-02-16 07:45 PM


dreamer thanky to you

ethome those durn bovine

lost in space but is he way in or way out?
(nice to meet yuh too)


PDV thank you always a pleasure to hear your comments

and to you my little Kit-a-dee thank you and it's time for my exit!!

cruz
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7 posted 2001-02-18 12:20 PM


"In modern algebraic form, Newton's law of gravitation is F = Gm1m2/r^2 where F is the gravitational attraction between two spherical bodies m1 and m2, whose centers are separated by a distance R. The symbol G is a constant, a number whose value is assumed not to vary with time and location in the universe; its value relates the size of the force to the sizes of the other quantities."

-"nomatterhowhardyoutry,youcan'tstopusnow"

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2001-02-18 12:23 PM


sorry had to reply to this...

Cruz write me some poems!!!!

Dee
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9 posted 2001-02-19 12:42 PM


Hey Walt, as usual your poem it unreal! Isn't it great to have friends like that?
Dee


I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

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10 posted 2001-02-20 09:48 AM


Sounds as though you have a friendship to be treasured. *S* I like this bunches, Walt! *S*
Irish Rose
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11 posted 2001-02-20 10:13 AM


YES, and friends are one reason I'm still here..the friends that keep ME going. I love this.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


wayoutwalt
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12 posted 2001-02-20 08:55 PM


my friend and I talk about the exit line all the time yuh i think its a classic like you lookin at me punk
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