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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-02-15 09:36 PM



NO TRUE LOVE CAN BE SO PAINFUL.
my life and what i want are two opposites.
NO FAKE LIES WILL EVER BE PARDON.
what makes me laugh is what makes me cry.
NO SWEET TOUCH CAN BE SO BITTER.
it takes me to heaven and it takes me to hell.
NO GOOD THING WILL EVER LAST.
love and hate, they hold hands.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
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Pearl city Iowa
1 posted 2001-02-15 09:58 PM


Very powerful words, I like the use of upper and lower case, love and hate are often two sides of the same coin. I enjoyed it thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2001-02-15 10:38 PM


walker-

powerful words you have penned here.
loved the emotion behind this...
excellent work...

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."


JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-02-15 11:12 PM


Fake lies..is that an oxymoron or a contradiction in terms? Other than that...I think I love you. But then, this is all just poetry.
walker
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4 posted 2001-02-16 07:26 AM


Thanks, for reading this.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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