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Comes the Day
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Comes the Day There will come a day, when our paths will cross I will at last be found, and never more be lost When in my welcome home, I shall forever be As I come to rest and reside in the arms of thee I shall be your warm sunshine, that which makes you smile You shall be my loving man, making everything worthwhile There shall be no yesterdays, only tomorrow’s memories For us to live in purest joy, while we embrace in we Then in the giving of our gifts of love and devotion We shall traverse together each and every emotion To those secret places known only by the two of us Where we reveal more as we delve into loving trust For I want you to know all of me, my little places of delight Whether you visit them in dawn of day, or in the dark of night I want you to touch and feel the satin of my skin I want you to fathom sweet the depths of my within And what I want from you, my love, is your body next to mine And make all of my dreams come true, a reality in time For there is never a moment that I take a breath to me That you do not reside in the deepest part and heart of me… When all is done and in sheets we lie, sated and sublime And our looks exchange, your eyes twinkling in mine With a curve of lip, a smile, a beguiling come hither plea… We will again embrace, and wrap ourselves again in we…. For in your love, I would reside To be your forever, by your side |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"For in your love, I would reside To be your forever, by your side" This flows so softly. Loving, passionate and poigniantly composed. Altogether, excellent writing. Enjoyed muchly. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For I want you to know all of me, my little places of delight Whether you visit them in dawn of day, or in the dark of night I want you to touch and feel the satin of my skin I want you to fathom sweet the depths of my within And what I want from you, my love, is your body next to mine And make all of my dreams come true, a reality in time For there is never a moment that I take a breath to me That you do not reside in the deepest part and heart of me… When all is done and in sheets we lie, sated and sublime And our looks exchange, your eyes twinkling in mine With a curve of lip, a smile, a beguiling come hither plea… We will again embrace, and wrap ourselves again in we…. For in your love, I would reside To be your forever, by your side ======================== outstanding outpouring of intention. sensual and enticing ... very lovely Lady ... very lovely indeed Welcome new poet... so very nice to have you here. I look forward to more of your work. When you see thru loves illusion, theres the danger your perfect lover looks like a perfect fool you go running off in search of a perfect stranger |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you both very much! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...what a beautifully expressed love, with longing's sweet intensity...crafted with grace. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you Martie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whew! You paint some very interesting images here, miss...very skillfully crafted |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you, Balladeer. |
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Dear Heart Junior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 23Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right |
Utterly wonderful, this has such a delightful flow and sound, it is pure magic. A delight to see this a real delight  Reach out and touch someone Holland Dozier and Holland |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"And what I want from you, my love, is your body next to mine And make all of my dreams come true, a reality in time For there is never a moment that I take a breath to me That you do not reside in the deepest part and heart of me" Oh Oh Oh LiW - you've found a way into MY heart = - this is exquisite! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked this a lot  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all very much. You are very kind with your comments. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
It flows so well that it is a most beautiful poem.. |
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