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Lorelei54
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0 posted 2001-02-15 10:06 AM


My world is a far sweeter place,
The sun shines warmer on my face,
Every worry that once etched its trace,
You've erased from the life I knew.

I wonder how I could have earned,
Your loving ways of tender concern,
The way you've made my passions burn,
On each day we share between us two.

You're wonderful and you own my heart,
I thank God for each day you are a part,
Of the love grown stronger from the start,
When you blessed me with your words, "I do."


Just sharing his words, as he is busy at work again...but we are both well and happy...and miss you all.




[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 02-15-2001).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-02-15 10:48 AM


You are both blessed with each othe..huggzz to you both...beautiful words posted *s

~Wynter/Maureen


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-02-15 11:09 AM


thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us..........very very sweet. -SEA
Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-02-15 11:11 AM



You're a lucky woman to have him, what a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing this with us~

Take care,
Melissa~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-02-15 11:14 AM


awhhhhhhhhhhhhh

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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5 posted 2001-02-15 12:53 PM


As much as I hate to compliment the ole scalawag, his poem is as beautiful as the love between the two of you! *S*

(I tried to send you anniversary wishes yesterday, but my email was returned saying you didn't exist? LOL. Just where did LJA whisk you away to anyway... there's no email in paradise? *G* I re-sent to his work account this morning... but with this poem, I don't have to ask if it was a happy one. *S*)

Lorelei54
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6 posted 2001-02-15 06:11 PM


Thank you one and all...sitting here waiting for our daughter and Dessa to come visit with us....and enjoying a glass or two of wine...lol

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 02-15-2001).]

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