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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-02-15 07:26 AM

Lover of all times
and places,
Lover of violent crimson passion
and bittersweet words,
Lover of liquified chocolate
heated to boiling,
Lover of magnificent insincerity
and dreams of golden sands,
Lover of freedoms call
and destiny's yearning,
Lover of all women..
Let me touch you
once more
to hold within my arms
the illusion
of our finest hours.
And while I hear you call to me
my arms remain empty
though my heart bursts;
Your ruthlessly seductive voice
wraps me in desire.
My lover
of blackened ice
and blue-red fire..

Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today.
— James Dean

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-15 08:28 AM

darn Sandra..this one got to me.....and I promised myself a non-tearful day..*s

hugging you
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-15 12:57 PM

wow Sandra. . . totally full of passion and longing. . .

superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-02-15 05:05 PM

~LADY!!!! Where have you and these words been hiding? This is awesome,...
"My lover
of blackened ice
and blue-red fire..", the whole thing really.
Missed you and your work. *Peace Friend.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-02-15 05:08 PM

Some great writing bleeding through this yearning!

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

5 posted 2001-02-15 05:35 PM

Catalina,
Such intense emotions from an intense heart. This was beautiful...
Love, Elise

Mendy
Junior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 34

6 posted 2001-02-15 06:16 PM

Sandra

I often wonder why so many poems seem to beone sided in their consideration of love - If we cannot or donot love inspite of or because of fault this wlove is fiction - for me you capture loves completeness the only thing left is to find it

Love the poem

Mendy

if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

7 posted 2001-02-15 06:31 PM

WOW, this is soo good.
Loved every word.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

8 posted 2001-02-15 11:07 PM

Great piece
Flaming and powerful!

Love it

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2001-02-16 04:53 AM

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! That one really grabs you and makes you listen. What a wonderful write from you my friend. You have to feel a might better just from getting some of that out. Loved the imagery in this one even if they did come with pain attached and the cadence was great. Well done.

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