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Chocolate Kisses |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Chocolate Kisses Chocolates in a heart shaped box arranged so neat. Waiting for the softness of your lips my sweet. Will they know the touch of your lips? Will they share the pleasure of your chocolate kiss? How I yearn to feel the bliss of your sweet chocolate kiss. One box will never do. I must share at least a billion chocolate kisses with you. You are as sweet as a chocolate treat. Your lips like lovely red roses my sweet. How wonderful to count my blessings and to find one so beautiful as you my treasured valentine. How nice to receive the sweetest valentine to hear you say you will be mine. Jameslee@February14,2001 MichelleIMissYour ChocolateKiss. Morethanyesterday andlessthantomorrow. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet kisses, James...I live in the state where Hershey's chocolates are made hmmmmm even sweeter X~ XXX XXXXX XXXXXXX XXXXXXXX ~Wynter...darn I use to be able to do this..I give up trying for now *s but found this for you  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-15-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Such lovley thoughts on display here. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I don't know how you did it, but you did! You created a Velentine piece that seems fresh and new. Way far from over done and yet you did it with chocolate, a tried and true confectionary tradition! Enjoyed the read. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
A chocolate masterpiece. Great job! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with everyone else.....a terrific piece and most importantly, a different piece especially with all these Valentine poems floating around.....peace! Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Walker, wynter, Marge, Vas and Nate for your kind words...chocolate kisses to you...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed seeing this and reading these words, thank you "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ummm ummm good! Oh so good ...very well written I enjoyed it immensely! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is delightful... and not even fattening! *G* Well done! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JamesMichael, Awww.. just totally and completely sweet.. your poem..not the chocolate kisses!  I liked  |
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