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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-02-15 01:58 AM


HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!


One brush of your lips on mine
Two hands with a touch divine
Three long kisses that taste so sweet
Four times my heart skipped a beat
Five caresses over lush curves
Six soft whispers of sweet love words
Seven times I called your name
Eight more kisses and none too tame
Nine love songs sung in my ear
Ten Valentines sent to say you care
Eleven smiles between us two
Twelve red roses from me to you



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2001-02-15 02:38 AM


Great sequential piece!

Nathan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-02-15 04:24 AM


Very nice Koko...hope you have a nice
Valentines day..James

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-02-15 06:30 AM


Hey, how did you know I got 12 roses yesterday from my husband? I loved this one!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2001-02-15 07:21 AM


KoKo~
Just a lovely presentation of thoughts and format ...
Greatly enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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