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Her Valentine's Day.........( for Janet)
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Her Valentine's Day.........( for Janet) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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With a hot cup of coffee On a cold winter's day She started her morning In the usual way Nothing different Everything the same Until quietly she heard him Whisper her name It's not real……… A trick from my mind He's gone now And left me behind On with her day She had work to do She didn't have any more time To think of you Pushing memories away Choking her heart Now isn't the time She can fall apart Please…….make them wait Until the end of the day Then I promise You can have your way………………… Night is gently falling It's time for bed Emotions race frantically From heart to head Memories call pleadingly Bringing his face to her mind So gentle…………so loving And always so kind She has no choice and let's his memories have their way remembering her love this Valentine's Day 2-14-01 8:10 pm ~SEA~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Valentine memories can be some of the most enduring can't they? This had a very soft feel to it....enjoyed. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
A hard hard day for many. And I am certainly the same. But tomorrow offers a sunrise new. Make of it all you can. AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-15-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful! Another super write Lois  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea~ There are just not the words to say how much this one is going to mean to JM... You've brought tears to my eyes with the beauty and the feeling in this piece, awesome work...straight from the heart~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is so lovingly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sea-girlie... Holly is right ...this does indeed touch me and is held dear. Thank you very much for sharing this gift with me ... I know you understand all too well the pull of the past and the sweet longing found in the memories. And as Jamie said this has a soft beautiful wistfulness too it. Thanks sweet poet ... for this and for starting my day out with this smile anybody ever tell ya you are way cool and groovy too  love ya girlie-girl TY  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Sea, your tribute to the memory of Devante touched me, what a beautiful, bittersweet poem you have given her, especially on Valentine's Day. I'm so glad that Janet Marie has so many poets here who care about her Take care, Melissa~ The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams ~Melissa P. Monette~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--Valentine memories are the sweetest, beautifully penned...  ..Poeminister[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-15-2001).] |
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