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0 posted 2001-02-14 08:51 PM


Dream Lovers Dance
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/01

Aroma of roses and sugar fills the room with you and me holding each other
Beneath passions rosebudded festoon, I carry you in my arms, you hold me, wearing your silk white dress, kissing my lips and chest
My head swims in the heat of your charm, we moan, falling into each other
You giggle as I gently lay you, my loving princess on the bed, you pull me down to you, holding me around my neck

Eclipse of desire burns between us, laying beside each other, looking into each others eyes
I watch as your lips slightly move in a smile, as you softly say, “Oh love, how I love you so!”
I sing a small song for you, all the desire cursing my bloodstream comes swimming out in pleasant surprise
Your blood begins to warm, as you respond with your sweet words for me, as all the accumulating love and lust for each other escapes us, beginning to chain together into each others souls

You softly touch my neck, dragging your soft fingers up my cheek, and dragging your two fingers down my lips as you bend in to kiss me
I wrap myself around your goddess body, laying you down, our bodies attached together within the flame of passion
I smell your wavy long amber hair as it tides like the waves of the ocean, the smell of roses and strawberries leaving me loosened in your beauty
I find myself lost in your heart now, as my lips dance with yours, holding each other outside winters quiet breath, chilly and frigid

You lay your hands over me, dragging your hands down my chest, sighing all romantic
As I feel velvet skidmarks of your love jumping like fire up, diving down again and flowing in my veins
I softly giggle as I pull you down and kiss your tender cherry lips again, a feeling more beautiful than touching the rose petals smooth softness
We as one cuddled up safe close to each others hearts, spinning together in becomings vortex, neither of us anxious, neither of us afraid

I glide with you further to our heavens, we dextrose upon the vertical silver lining to the precipice of our passion and loving care
Ebullient hearts beating hot, awoken to the given lightened match of a lover setting another’s heart aflame
Breaking out in a light sweat as lips kiss on and on, loves words flood the room, passions shadows cast on, across the walls they flare
You and me on vacation in each others hearts wonderland, drops of dreams and pieces of spirit filling the lenses of hearts eyes, free of sorrow and pain

Two hearts melt as one in this universal dream lovers dance
Under the serenity delirium veil, hearts are explored, kissing tears of sorrow away, breathing sweet tears of contentment
As up There, the givers of love silently clap in standing ovation as the cupids soar on unicorns, lively they prance
Loves season has come, forever to be treasured, love truly meant


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1 posted 2001-02-16 02:21 PM


this is nice, I would suggest more line breaks......for the eyes!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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