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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-14 08:43 PM



Dreamkeeper your poem inspire me to write these lines for you.

Keep reminding yourself
and be thankful.For memories are
what we're made of. We are fragile
indeed, but a good memory can make us
want to breath. The rain it does bring
sorrow, but it also brings new life.
As well as a rainbow at times.
Acceptance is a form of repentance
but only when we thought we have failed.
It seems that you are very thankful, for having
had the chance to be loved and have loved.
But note that our lives are so short, that
given the chance to love for a second,
most of us would gamble it all.
Don't worry about tears my friend, for
most of them are made of toxins anyway.
Be thankful to have yesterday, for
tomorrow will bring its sweet sorrows.


Even though I sound very positive today, I too have my days of sweet sorrows.Thanks for inspiring me.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
ATelamon
Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
1 posted 2001-02-14 08:57 PM


Your words in solace giving
kindness understanding
echo the self who knows
the same and more realizes
we are here to help each other

Well done your kindness
touches more than you could know
my thanks especially
on this day

AT

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

Celeste
Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-14 09:46 PM


Thank you so much. Made me cry. You have no idea how much this meant to me. You've made a really tough day a little easier. Thank you.

To capture and live a moment is truly living


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