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insect
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0 posted 2001-02-14 03:35 PM



your butterfly’s are on my mind
prettier then pretty, the most gorgeous kind
i love to stare in their most gorgeous colour
my valentine, my butterfly lover

sweet is the taste of your touch
a touch I desire, I hunger so much
hold me, touch me and feed me your love
fly into my heart like the purest white dove

your voice is a song the way an angel would sing
vibrating my soul like a church bell ring
your blue butterfly’s have me in a trance
opening my heart to take loves chance


© Copyright 2001 insect - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-02-14 03:42 PM


And your words sing a song of happiness to this cowboy on this day. Nice to see you sharing a piece of your heart and the colour of your works with us. Lovely read.
VAS
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2 posted 2001-02-14 03:42 PM


Like it! It has a playful, nonsensical feel to it. Lovely.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-02-14 03:50 PM


(sigh) Beautiful, romantic poem! I saw such peaceful, lovely visions as I read this! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

insect
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4 posted 2001-02-14 03:52 PM


Mark Bohannan
thank you
you’ve always got a nice way of putting things

VAS
this is the day when that word “love” comes out to play more often
thanks for the reply


insect
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5 posted 2001-02-14 04:08 PM


Mistletoe Angel
thank you friend
this is a day when hearts open up...
but not the only day
passion's hearts seem to open up everyday


Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 2001-02-14 09:35 PM


A lovely display of your butterfly wings
Delicately woven with the right touches in
all the right places....A perfect read on
Valentine's Day~

insect
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7 posted 2001-02-15 12:07 PM


Butterflies_dont_cry
thank you

for you
____________________________

why butterflies don’t cry

the heart inside a butterfly
is made of love and seeks a sigh
only true love lives in this place
only love’s expression on her face

the prettiest creature is a butterfly
the purest insect when you’re shy
they float from the wind of a spoken sigh
an unconditional love in your sky

this is why butterflies don’t cry



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 02-15-2001).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 2001-02-15 06:35 AM


Insect~
You've softly touched my heart with your
beautiful golden strands of weave...my
sincere thanks to you sweet poet~



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 02-15-2001).]

Poeminister
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9 posted 2001-02-15 04:20 PM


Insect-
Lovely write. I like this muchly.

Poeminister

SpitFire
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10 posted 2001-02-15 04:57 PM


~This is too cute. Hee. . How thoughtful and sweet and sort of singing along! Enjoyed this I. Lots. Happy Hearts Day! *Peace.
ethome
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11 posted 2001-02-15 04:58 PM


Well done and full of a sort of musical warmth...good stuff!

Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination!

SEA
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with you
12 posted 2001-02-16 10:21 PM


Have you been peeking at my tattoo?!?!?!

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No, really, this is awesome..........very romantic..... SEA

insect
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13 posted 2001-02-21 10:54 AM


Butterflies_don’t_cry
thank you
happy to see it touched you

Poeminister
thank you
always nice to have your reply

Fire
thanks i
*peace be with you

ethome
thank you
it’s the tune of a butterfly!

Lois
yes! yes i was!
thanks


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