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jellybeans
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0 posted 2001-02-14 09:37 AM


ok, so I wasn't going to be here today, and the 'day' I am talking about is not Valentines Day, its because I got stopped this morning...AND didn't get a ticket *sly grin*)


I might be dangerous
  
the road was long
and deserted
when in the rearview  
sirens roar lights blink
and she cursed beneath her breath
until
she saw his face
entranced was she by his
all business no time for play
license and registration please
her eyes twinkled
she grabbed her fantasy quick
before he realized he was to be the  
costar
and she asked
don't I look dangerous to you?
taken aback  
more by what her eyes were voicing
than by her question  
his mind blanked his reply
at first
then somehow
coming up with an
excuse me?
but from deep inside his wanting  
an attentive salute  
interpreted the twinkle
before she needed to  
clarify
and so he looked down  
she asked again
don't you think I look dangerous?
I would search me
if I were you...
eyes locked  
in silent conversation
questions and answers traveling
in split second time
the twinkle in her eyes
and the curve of her  
take me to your mouth and kiss me lips
spoke to him so loudly that  
reason could no longer be heard
and he almost didn't recognize the voice  
that said
maybe you should step out of the car miss  
and spread them wide
she too quickly for him to change his mind
obliged
I might be dangerous she laughed again  
over her shoulder
you should be thorough
with your search, that is
and she arched her firm body
into the smoothness  
into the hardness  
of his search
she turned to face
her fantasy...
and what he gave
she took


[This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 02-14-2001).]

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-02-14 02:30 PM


Did you say dangerous or just plain ole forthright??? Makes one think about changing careers. Nice little story filled with much imagination. (if it wasn't imagination...I don't want to know..LOL) Seriously....I enjoyed the read much and you capture the reader rather quickly in this piece and hold them to the end effortlessly.
suthern
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2 posted 2001-02-14 02:34 PM


And you say you got out of a ticket just this morning? *G* Pray tell, just how big is the grin on your face? LOL This is wonderful... and wicked... and whew (fanning flushed face)! *G*
jellybeans
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3 posted 2001-02-14 04:26 PM


Mark.....lolol...no....*putting hands in the air* Really! it was just imagination, I think I even blushed to think if it wasn't ...thanks for your comments

suthern, you stop that fanning lol you are creating quite a breeze.....lolol....and he was just in a forgiving mood...be it valentines day and all...I really didn't have to cross my legs, wink, or flirt a bit......
rofg
j/k
I promise.....

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