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Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time !

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Marge Tindal
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Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time !
An Overdose Of Valentine ~Sweetness~
~Marge Tindal~

Honey, do you love me ?
Darling, do you care ?
Sugar, I just yearn for you.
Baby, do we dare?

Sweetheart, do you love me ?
Lovey, do you hear?
Snookums, can you stand ...
~Sweet Nothings~ in your ear ?

Babe, I hear you calling.
Cupcake, here I am.
Angel, I have fallen ...
God, I love this man !

You'd be my Valentine,
if I had not hesitated ...
This overdose of sweet stuff
has got me nauseated !

Sugarplum, honeybear,
I want to be your Valentine.
If you don't get really sick
on this little rhyme !

*Pass the Pepto Bismol !


A regurgitated piece from Open #5 !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
This is so sweet it nearly made me sick. pass the Pepto Bismal(or as we would say alka seltza) indeed
Write on
Kethry


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Margie girl, And I thought it was an attempt to assassinate me. Being that it's called Let's Get Mushy, I was just going to throw my hands up and say I'm sorry. I'm sorry anyway, it doesn't hurt to say it before I commit any faux pas.

I love it dear heart, even if it made me slightly nauseous, okay not slightly, very!

Wonderful love, and if you're going to get me, can I choose you to speak the eulogy, I just know you'd do a good job.
Love it
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-14-2001).]
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Whew...I'm in a sugar overdose here! Cute!!
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My wife says I call her these names because I can't remember her real name.
Sickeeee, but sweet.
Melton
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Marge~
Hello, my dear, sweet friend! I have missed you! I have missed your lovely poetry, too! Thank you for bringing back this one, my friend. It is lovely! I needed the good smile that this one brought to my heart today! Happy Valentine's Day to you, dear!



Love Ya~

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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'Honey bun', 'sugar snookums', 'sweety cakes'
any of these
or my favorite:
'love'
(I keep it simple)
no diabetic here -
just don't call me late for dinner
this tickled me
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Ah, this poem indeed filled me with much sweetness of Valentines Day as I read it, I felt really lovesick after I read this. I shouldn't drink that much Pepto Bismol! (giggles) Such a novel, excellent poem! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you this lovely Valentines Day!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Kethry~
EXACTLY ... !

Marsha~
LOL @ you !

PoetdeVine~
Thanks !

2DaLimit~
LOL !
Now those are grounds for CHOCOLATE !

TerryW~
Hello, love.
I've missed you too.
Seeing you here is the nicest Valentine I've received today !
*Hugs*

Wilfred~
Well, love ...
Glad to tickle you ... somehow I think you'd enjoy that !

Noah~
Tee-Hee !
I love sharing the sweets !
~*Marge*~


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Marge, I believe you win the prize...gooey sweet for sure! Laughing!

Robert Joseph
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RJ~
LOL !
Thank you ...
and it'd be my luck ...
I'd win something like a box of chocolates !
Ummm ! Could we make that dark chocolate with almonds ? !
~*Marge*~


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Ugggghhh....TOO much sugar...never thought I'd say that!! Very cute (and nauseating) write, Marge!

sp


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...
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This is SO sweet, my little gootsy-wootsy teddy bear!! I got so gosh darned teary-eyed reading it my heart just flip-flopped all over the room....thank you, sugar plum
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um.....pink? .... not my color....but a good laugh....
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Oh, geesh! *G* I'm so glad I didn't read this yesterday... I would have hated to ruin the taste of fine chocolates with a pepto chaser! LOL. Thanks for the grins! *S*
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Dear friendly Marge, you've said it all
Such a couple would have a ball.
They'd whoop it up and just get randy
These words go down like cotton candy.
Just as sweet as all get out.
They kinda make me laugh and shout.
Is this the way I should have talked
To my ex-wife when she squawked?
I fear to use these terms endearing,
I'd be near an altar, I'd be fearing.

Thanks for sharing this with me on my "Women don't love "Sweet" post and thanks for the nice comments.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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Ken~
Thanks for the little 'sweet nuttins' verse~
Very clever~
Enjoyed the giggles with you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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