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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2001-02-14 05:36 AM


Multi-coloured
stranded lonely
in a sea PURE blue
races lonely accross
oceans

look with longing
at the the skies
soft hues
accross the currents
through the ages
back to a time
before loneliness
before paradise
stole my hopes.


The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

© Copyright 2001 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-02-14 08:45 AM


Walter,
I love this line "until paradise stole my hopes"
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2001-02-15 09:59 AM


Hi Walter,

Know the feeling of longing for peace, wonderful read here thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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