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X Angel
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0 posted 2001-02-14 02:42 AM


I think I finally found him
the writer of this fairy tale come true
he's not famous or rich, just a simple man
with a gentle soul and a compassionate heart
his eyes could tell you of a thousand lonely nights
his hands are covered with the marks of hard work
yet when they touch me so tenderly
I could swear they were as smooth as silk
his laugh, sometimes silly, sometimes deep
is as infectuous as a summer cold
and I love the way he takes the time
to look deep in my eyes, to delve my meanings
from my words and body language
he knows me inside and out
and with him there is no hiding of my true self
for he seeks it out as sure as any bloodhound
and finds my true heart, my true soul, the real me
and he settles for nothing less
demanding of me the truth of feeling
the promise of forever, the security of love
he's more than a friend, more than a lover
he's the true mating of my soul with his
the final touches on the canvas of my life



A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life to be thankful for a good one.
Mae West (1892-1980)


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Ladycat
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1 posted 2001-02-14 08:00 AM


That was wonderful. I know that feeling. I know that feeling ahhhh tooo well. I hope that you never stop having that feeling. Such a great piece. I will have to share this with a few of my friends, if you don't mind. I have been trying to explain my feelings for a long time and you wrote them just right.

Thank you so much for the writing.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Alicat
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2 posted 2001-02-14 10:10 AM


Heather, it is soooo good to see you back in the Forums, especially with the one you care so much for. Welcome back, hon.

BTW, me likes this one mucho!

Alicat

Munda
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3 posted 2001-02-14 05:47 PM


Heather, this is sooo beautiful and makes me sit here in awe filled with the wonderful feeling you created with this poem. I'm so happy love has found you.
ethome
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4 posted 2001-02-14 05:55 PM


Love is so beautifl when it's presented in this way...this is a fabulous write and you are very much appreciated through my eyes!
athena4
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5 posted 2001-02-14 06:35 PM


X-Angel,
What a beautiful read. So much depth of love and contentment. You are a lucky woman, and your love is equally as lucky to have found a heart so full of expression...
Elise

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6 posted 2001-02-14 07:06 PM


Heather~
Sounds like you've got yourself a great guy. Best of luck to the both of you....have a wonderful Valentine's Day!

Colin
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7 posted 2001-02-18 04:15 PM


It has been revealed, by anonymous sources, that the dreamer of dreams feels incredibly happy too

Suburbia is where the developer bulldozes out the trees, then names the streets after them. - Bill Vaughan

Cerenity
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Escondido-California
8 posted 2001-02-19 11:40 PM


Hi X Angel,

Its so nice to read of true love, you have penned a beauty here, and I am so happy for you finding someone that really understands you thats something that does not happen often.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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