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Open Poetry #12

Unwrapped Benevolence

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2001-02-13 11:43 PM

'Unwrapped Benevolence'

Candlestick poles fall in file, waving their golden hair
Stationed along the crackling bare pavement.
I perform a saunter, in my depressionated despair
And wine filled stars hold me to enslavement.
Cliché patterned houses, bathe in white lacy snow
And mailboxes full of responsibility dispense laughter.
Where I end is skeptical, but my feet will gingerly go
As I embark upon Memory Lane of before and after.
Keep enduring I do, But I will thirstily stretch for a code
And assign every street a footprint of prevalence.
Momentous fragments of me, shape the uncouth roads
Leaving the night a memory of my benevolence.
For I gave Night a confidant, and a ear to fully listen
And our infiniticious passions will grow together.
I teeter-totter into the charcoals, Mr. Night behind in glisten
Back to origin I go to rid me of this rainy weather…

Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark.

[This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 02-13-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-13 11:45 PM

And mailboxes full of responsibility

For I gave Night a confidant, and a ear to fully listen

so many good lines here...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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