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Red wine |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Red wine,-- I’m dancing with a phantom. How sweet is life! How sweet is life! Red wine,-- the pleasure came at random and washed away my grief and strife! Another glass and tears are sweet now! Another glass and all seems fine! Red wine,-- I’m feeling so complete now. Red wine,-- again... again, she’s mine! Before my eyes, the world is spinning, Before my eyes, she stands again! Red wine,-- my life is just beginning,-- Red wine,-- my grief is at its end! ------------------ Check out more of my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wine is the way many people choose to "drown their sorrows," and you have captured that very well. (NO I don't encourage drinking as a way out, just saying it happens.) Nice work Master! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
So very very true. A very good write. Left me with old memories........ To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With red wine, I usually get regrets... and I have enough of those sober. *S* I enjoyed the read! |
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