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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-02-13 06:46 PM



It would be so easy
for me to ask him 'why'
Why must I watch him suffer?
Why must he see me cry?

Why would he come into my life
just to have him taken away?
Why won't you make him better?
Why won't you help him heal today?

Why, after all of these years
did you let me find this love,
This love feels like it was written
from up in the stars above?

Just to let me sit and watch
as time decides his fate,
Each moment slowly ticking by
tick tock, tick tock, I wait.

Couldn't you help to guide them
and help them find a clue,
as to what it is he needs,
or what it is that they should do?

Yes it would be so easy
for me just to ask him WHY.....
but I'll just keep my faith
and I'll be strong,
I'll try.......


Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-02-13 06:49 PM


Sigh...I read this from the heart..I can feel your pain.

Hard question to ask...

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-02-13 06:57 PM


Thanks S, it's easy to say what it isn't but so darn hard to figure out what it is.....and we can do nothing but wait. Thanks......just venting steam.....

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-02-13 07:00 PM


Is everything ok? Send me a note..ok huggzzzz..I felt this

~Wynter/Maureen


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-02-14 05:29 PM


All is not well M. Today is worse. I will keep you posted. Thank you.
D

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

Sven
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5 posted 2001-02-14 07:05 PM


sometimes D. . . trying is all that we can do. . .



excellent words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-02-14 08:57 PM


Sven, thank you so much for the note of cheer. It really helps to know that your friends are there for you in thought. I think knowing can be hard, but not knowing.....sigh.....it's just scarey. Thanks hon. *peace*

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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