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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-13 06:16 PM


Blue on blue the words
Lighted me to you are
Ushering dreams in seeking
Every reach to your amaze deepen

Open vaults prism sighs escaping
Nocturnal yearns lead sights touching

Blue forays selves cautious offer
Lamplights gleam in eyes revealing
Unto every line a reaching forth to
Each step hope eternal Spring the season



"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-02-13 07:02 PM


Interesting...interesting...

all I can say is - go cautiously. And you know what I mean my friend.

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
2 posted 2001-02-13 07:55 PM


Very abstract. I like it, very contemporary.

~Alison~

"Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear."

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