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“Two Arrows”
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“Two Arrows” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Cupid shot two arrows, with great precision aimed… And when they reached their targets, our lives forever changed… My arrow opened up my eyes, to see you waiting there… And yours gave you true sight to see my heart, and know I cared… My arrow pierced the walls that I had built, around my heart… Yours guided you into my life, and now we’ll never part… So…on this day of Valentines, and hearts, I wish to say… My thanks to Cupid, and two arrows, that he aimed our way…  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ This is so gosh-darned CUTE ! I really like it ... I'm sure cupid has hit his mark !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very cute post for Valentine's, Sunny! Love it!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Well, I know someone its going to have a great Valentine's Day. Is great to be in love! And to be able to express it like you. Beautiful. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The only thing cuter than you words is YOU yourself my sister. What a treat to see you showing your wonderful smiling heart with us. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sunny, the charm and glitter of this piece make it a pure delight to read, great presentation! Robert Joseph |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - this is very nice, and very uplifting. Something that I can use about now. BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Sunny, I am late reading Valentines poems. I was not able to write or read poems for about a week, but I'm back... This was great, very happy, perfect for that certain someone. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
delightful...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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