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Valentines Day |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Valentines Day Cloud skirted mountains, rainbow skies Sunbeams prancing off you and I Loves sweet embrace in the air all around “Tis” the season for love so profound Valentines Day is when I sing out loud Bringing my love down from the clouds Momentous day when I first saw you Day to go down in history too My life changed in so many ways I’ve walked around with my mind in a haze Valentines Day is when I make my plea Loving forever just you and me Not a day goes by you are not on my mind No words could I ever truly find To tell you how much you mean to me I want to carve our initials in a tree Valentines Day is when I make my move Announce to the world that I love you Neither raging of storm nor freeze of night Shall keep me from telling what beloved sight You are to my soul and without fear No trembling of “self” I shall implore you to hear Valentines Day my soul shall speak of such love Never ending in time and blessed from above No secrets shall I ever keep from the one I love My sight has never gazed upon such a beautiful dove I truly desire to promise you forever There is no one else in this world whatsoever Valentines Day on bended knee i’m going to ask of thee To be my one and only Valentine for eternity By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sister Cerenity...I certainly hope you send this to your intended. It's almost as sweet as the poet who wrote it! Lovely, you. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
'Tis the season for open hearts! Enjoyed the read.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....I loved this one, Cerenity!!! It just feels like Valentine's Day!! Thank you for sharing it......  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwwww..I liked this one so very much and enjoyed the added couplets...huggzzzzzz ~Wynter/Moonchild "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Serenity,Dragonpoe,Sunnyone,Wynter Thank you everyone for your wonderful replys on my poem, im laughing cause I didn't even think about giving it to my husband he's such a bad boy hehe, I guess I could though, he gave me a new garbage disposal this last weekend and said happy valentines what a guy! thank you again and have a great holiday. Love, Cerenity |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful..and you SHOULD give it to him. But then again, maybe you should give him a hammer since he gave you a garbage disposal.... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sharon, That's cute, he needs one too, he's as romantic as a rock so I never even thought about giving it to him, I know a really small hammer that will only be used for hanging picture, hey I could put him to work hehe! thank you. Love, Cerenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Cerenity? Now I KNOW we are sisters....I got a refrigerator...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Very, very sweet ... just like you, my friend. Awwww ... give him a *kiss* ... !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Serenity, A refrigerator how nice, ill have to wait till mines been broke for at least a year before that happens, don't ya know thats the policie broke for a year before it can get replaced! hehe, Marge, Thanks sweetie, all right im going to give it to him, but a kiss "hum" I will have to think about that one hehe, Love ya both, Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity. . . I not only loved reading this from you. . . but also reading your responses made me laugh. . . I never knew. . . Happy Valentine's Day my friend. . . and remember that sometimes, even a rock can break. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Thank you for liking the poem, I have to say though he did not like the poem and and in as many words as he could find let me know how diapionted he was that I didn't give him something else, so I change my mind a BIG hammer is what I shall go get and then see if the rock breaks!!!! its OK though because I share my poetry here with people that care and thats just the way it is. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Aww, this is a very sweet peace, Cerenity....I almost wished you was writing that to me(smiles)......very nice poem....peace! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a well written delightful piece Cerenity...gives the old heart a lift....take care! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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