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Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
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0 posted 2001-02-13 01:49 PM


Dearest Love,

As many nights go by
in my darkness I sit,
staring at the indigo skies
imagining, how 'twould be if only
I could swing from star to star,
high above this earth and search
below for thou...

Loneliness, does not
become this fair lady, whose heart
hast been stolen by thee.
I walk the halls, meeting wall after wall
stone, cold gray, reminding mineself
'tis only a short time before thou
shall return...if only
thy quests were completed.
~~~
Mine heart rests in thine hands, so strong
Within dreams dreamt, I'm weakness veiled
Naked thoughts, in absence yours
Waiting, wanting, each breath inhaled.

Fears arise, for each moment lost
'Tis times unwind, life's forward lure
Mine thirst for thee, of kisses bold
Shall cast mine pleasures in nights, explore.

In distance bound, invades mine warmth
In visions yours, shall I appear
Your Lady waits with heartened love
To rest within thy world, thy sphere.

Mine heart is tamed, held labled thine
'Tis truth, I'm yours, sweet valentine.

Lovingly,
Lady Ollyne




"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 02-13-2001).]

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Severn
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1 posted 2001-02-13 01:54 PM


Straight out of a medieval fairytale...sigh...

thanks for the read...

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

dragonpoe
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2 posted 2001-02-13 01:54 PM


A brilliant piece! Written masterfully. Loved it!


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe


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Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-02-13 08:47 PM


This was beautiful!! You are fortunate to have such a love.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-02-13 11:27 PM


LadyOllyne~
Just a perfect Valentine~

'Mine heart is tamed, held labled thine
'Tis truth, I'm yours, sweet valentine.'


Perfectly elegant !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-02-14 04:58 AM


Very nice...James
Sven
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6 posted 2001-02-14 01:08 PM


*bows*

Again Poet Fair, thou hast indeed touched the heart of this Knight with thy words. . . as always. . . one would wish that indeed thou dost have someone to share this day of Valentine's. . . and if not, that one day, thou wilt have. . .

Until next we meet Poet Fair. . .

*bows*

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7 posted 2001-02-14 02:43 PM


(sigh) Oh, so beautifully romantic! Yes, your love is so blessed to share your beautiful heart, for your love is lovingly yours! Such a sweet poem, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Robert Joseph
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8 posted 2001-02-14 08:36 PM


Your Lady waits with heartened love
To rest within thy world, thy sphere.

Lady Ollyne, your words float the hope of love's reward. A pleasure to read!


Robert Joseph



WinterTalon
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Brooksville, KY, USA
9 posted 2001-02-14 08:39 PM


Reminds me of the days of yore... or before... Anywayz, awesome write.

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~


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