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vandana
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0 posted 2001-02-13 11:12 AM


I sit and
Think of so many
Dreams to follow my heart,
I wonder sometime
How time runs by?
It has been raining
All day,
As I watch the rain
coming down,
I sit and take my pen
And a paper to write down
the words,
The words that
I been longing to tell you
How much I miss you so much?
So much that
my tears starts to fall,
I always been in love with you,
for a long time
I can't deny that
Because I have been blue,
And when night comes along,
I wanted to call
your name,
But I know
you are so far away
so far away
to hold you tight,
It Is brings
Into tears,
I only think of the time,
The time that brought
me happiness,
Into my life,
I wonder,
If It Is just not for real,
I sometimes,
Think of the way
We used to sing
and dance with the joy,
I was happy then,
No matter what........


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-13-2001).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-02-13 11:14 AM


+ thaz positive thinkin o yuh

You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!


Celeste
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2 posted 2001-02-13 11:18 AM


Beautiful sweet memories, brought tears to my eyes. Oh those memories...........

Very well written. Soft and gentle.

To capture and live a moment is truly living


Agust P
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3 posted 2001-02-13 01:08 PM


beautiful, I liked this one! AP
vandana
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4 posted 2001-02-13 05:48 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-02-13 07:27 PM


VanDana~
Lovely thoughts, sweet poet.

'And when night comes along,
I wanted to call
your name'
...

Your heart IS calling his name ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Secret Whisper
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6 posted 2001-02-13 07:53 PM


Lovely thoughts of love. I dream of having someone pine so hard for me. Beautiful writing.

~Alison~

"Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear."

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