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Open Poetry #12

I will never

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

0 posted 2001-02-13 09:41 AM

I will never

Tell you “I love you”
hear you say “I don’t”.
Ask you to stay
Watch you leave.
Let you know you hurt me
try to hurt you back.
Call you and hang up
hang up when you call.
Look at your picture
forget your face.
Cry when I’m alone
smile when you pass by.
make excuses
Excuse you.
Think you were sincere
sincerely miss you

Again.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

[This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 02-13-2001).]

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 2001-02-13 10:28 AM

Now this is an angsty piece, filled with jaded conflicts of emotion. Yet still, yet still there resides within spine, backbone, firmament, the desire to no longer be used, for whatever reason. However, such resolutions intended towards one can very easily transfer to another, sans conscious thought.

That's what I got out of the poem, rather.

Alicat

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2001-02-13 10:29 AM

Liked this much

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-02-13 10:36 AM

wow this was cool sax yuh great one

You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

4 posted 2001-02-13 07:45 PM

Thanks ya'll, the comments are very much appreciated

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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