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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-13 01:31 AM



To Fly Above Life
Virginia Salter

running, coursing
speeds that grew
with every wave of step
accelerating naturally
until I’d have uplift

to soar above the trees
over and under wires
whirling secretly
around the glorious spire

carefully, so carefully
to keep this joy full hidden
so none would suspicious be
could do what was forbidden

even in tall buildings
with ceilings high off the floor
could fly as eagles easily
aloft from door to door

twas many years ago, my friend
it ceased to find its way
into my dreams, into my will
it only stands at bay

I miss those times of cloistered flight
when comrades in secret flew
with me loftily, joyfully
above the morning dew.

oh what has taken this feat from me
what has stolen it from my dreams
that I no longer dance and soar
above the babbling streams


© February 12,  2001


The above piece is inspired by “On Flight,” and my recurring dream of flying that has been gone now from my nights for more than a decade, maybe more than two.  I often find myself wondering why I lost this ability to fly above life.  I could glide and soar as an eagle.  I think I never had to flap my wings.  I kind of miss this fantasy that was so powerfully real.

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2001-02-13 07:09 AM


Virginia, your poem caused me to smile as I remember those dreams too. I was so sure they were real. Beautifully done.
Dee


I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-13 08:28 AM


Maybe it's because you already do.     

Lovely, Virginia!

To capture and live a moment is truly living


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-02-14 12:25 PM


Hi Vas,

I've taken many a trip as well, and this brings them back to my mind, I wish I could give answers to why not, I still fly out of desire may be im not sure, but this poem was awesome thank you for sharing.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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