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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-02-13 12:21 PM


Neverending love
A fantasy in my mind
Dreams are made of this

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2001-02-13 12:32 PM


Fantasy you say?
My heart insists you are wrong.
We believe in love.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-02-13 06:02 AM


Very nice Paula...whatever will be will be...James
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3 posted 2001-02-13 11:07 PM


Paula~

And dreams DO come true
When they are visioned upon
The waking of love

Perfect Senryu thoughts, sweet poet.
~*Marge*~


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lordmakemeweak
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4 posted 2001-02-13 11:44 PM


Fine Haiku Paula. God Bless you. And Happy Valentines Day.
Marsha
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5 posted 2001-02-14 09:13 AM


Paula dear heart, you are as always one of the shining stars here. Don't you dare grow too much I'll never catch up with you. I won't anyway but I can try.
Love this one utterly perfect and you make them look so easy, and I know they are not.
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-02-14 01:21 PM


Paula,
we all have this dream! Sometimes they come true!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2001-02-14 02:42 PM


kcsgrandma...not a question of belief really...just not yet reality...thank you

James...but darn it love...WHEN will it be LOL...hugs to you

Marge... The waking of love
From out of times dreaming sleep
Touch upon this heart

Thank you

lordmakemeweak...Happy Valentines to you also and thank you

Marsha...AWWW girl...as if I could ever hope to be the poet you are...thank you

Kathleen...I know they do and thats why I havent given up hope...feels silly some days but thats ok too...thanks

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