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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2001-02-12 09:44 PM


The Perfect Person

The perfect person would know tolerance,
they would be caring and never callous,
they would embrace the good in people,
ignore the questionable,
and not tolerate the intolerable.
The perfect person would know no flaws,
not of character,
nor of a physical nature.
They would shine above all others,
and lead
like a beacon,
all that have lost their way in the darkness,
back into the light.
The perfect person would never scold,
and always recognize the faults and failures
of others,
could very well be their own,
if not for circumstance.
The perfect person would never err,
slip,
and fall from grace.
There are no perfect people.
But, we all have the capacity to strive
to be so
simply by asking ourselves one simple question
before we open our mouths,
pick up a pen,
or lay fingers to a keyboard.
"How would I feel, if that were me?"


© Copyright 2001 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-02-12 09:54 PM


And if I had stopped to do so...I would likely be sitting in a much different place right now.  A smart man learns from his own mistakes.  A wise man learns from anothers.  Had I been a wise man...and had I read this...who knows?  Thank you for the insight.
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Member Seraphic
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2 posted 2001-02-13 02:52 PM


This very imperfect person can only agree with the ending! *S*
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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3 posted 2001-02-13 04:27 PM


What a wonderful insight you have into human nature, and how well this has put things into view, speaking for myself. I know that to be perfect is unattainable, as by our very nature, we never will be. But to strive to perfect ourselves is an ongoing task. What a great write this is!!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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