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Mendy
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 34


0 posted 2001-02-12 05:39 AM


Even the illusion is not as convincing
as it was when I was 19 had my first drink
got drunk, fell down, woke up, with every ping a gong
it was the truest escape then, reality?
miles away my friend, but then reality was good
no money, no job, no worries.
These days I stumble in thinking -
no matter how drunk I get reality shrouds
the illusion can't break through the clouds
don't even wake up with a banging head
just early,and promising to quit again.


if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru

© Copyright 2001 Hilton Mendelsohn - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2001-02-12 07:12 AM


Mendy - On this Monday morning - a day that I begin working with a group of teenage girls in an alcoholism rehab facility, this is a truly apt poem to begin my day... Very apt indeed...Nicely done..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-02-12 04:48 PM


Very honest...very accurate descriptions.  If I didn't hate the saying, 'been there, done that...'; I'ld use it here.  Don't wake up with a banging head, anymore?  Seems a hobby of youth has become a career choice. Promising to quit?  Promising who?  Thanks for sharing this.  Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-02-13 05:24 PM


very very honest -

having had personal experiences with family members who were heavy drinkers this touches a deep part of me.

thanks for it

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-02-13 10:10 PM


"everywhere ya go? there you are..."

just ask anybody around here...run into myself several times a day. HUGS

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
5 posted 2001-02-13 10:31 PM


LOTS OF HUGS. Hang in there.
Hugs, ME

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