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Moments In Time ... Doreens challenge

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


25 posted 02-14-2001 02:17 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Amazing how a fraction of time in our lives can leave us with an eternal flame of love that burns as bright in the birth of a new day as it did in the beginning. Very lovely write my friend and very beautiful in the showing of your heart in this celebration of life and love found in your angelic butterfly.

Loved the 2/4 line rhyme usage in this piece as well and you know the line splits are a signature of yours that we couldn't live without. Very beautiful words from you in every sense tied off in a ribbon of inspiration from Ecclesiastes!!! Hugs to ya sweetness!!
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with you


26 posted 02-15-2001 10:44 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Oh Janet, this is so beautiful......what an amazing outpouring of your heart.

"*Moments between moments* ...
*precious moments between moments in time.*
You were my meant to be ...
Be it by gift of fate ... or written in destiny's design."
I just LOVE this part, but of course, the whole poem too. Such a work of art....... -SEA
Janet Marie
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27 posted 02-15-2001 02:28 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Mark ...yes... somethings never leave us...
somethings never should ...
for as long as my butterfly muse gifts my pen with these writes of love promised....
I will hope to do him justice.
thank you baby ... for the patience and encouragement when I thought this one wouldnt happen.

Sea-girlie ... thank you much... and I knew youd like this one...and that verse..
thanks for the wonderful poem gift as well sweets

When you see thru loves illusion, theres the danger
your perfect lover looks like a perfect fool
you go running off in search of a perfect stranger


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28 posted 02-15-2001 08:14 PM       View Profile for AniKay83   Email AniKay83   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AniKay83

I'm crying now!!!! Beautiful, superb, perfect.... I don't think any of these words come close to describing this piece. Way to go, Janet.
Much love friend,
Krissie

"And I wanted you to turn away.
You don't remember, but I do.
You never even tried..."
~Fuel

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29 posted 04-05-2006 11:58 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh my!  I could cut and paste the entire thing here but you get the idea, OMG!  This was exactly what I needed to read tonight.  You know when you are fumbling about putting one foot in front of the other, and need something to ground you back to reality, and what is important?  Well, your poems do that for me, and this was right out of the ball park.

Like how good is this one line, it truly is an entire poem in itself,  

" I lived and loved a lifetime in a moment of you ... "

Yes, that is pure poetry!

 
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