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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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Life sneaks up on us and we never feel the sting until we see our heart's blood unexpected and blue spill upon our sleeves right from the veins because don't you know that's where our heart's blood belongs. Heat no heat heat no heat dialates the pupil and makes your desert eyes water to gather on your pillow... the real river styx with no passage possible and winter will never be relieved. It's all black and white black white life death life and death combined like a film noir playing for the hundredth time, you know the ending and stay for the credits anyway. Stay for my credits, don't walk out yet... maybe there is a part you missed on veiw number 97 98 99 you know the part where she says "wait, don't go" and he doesn't hear her. That's right all this time she DID say it and he you him we didn't pay attention. Isn't it funny how now that you know, it still hurts in the end... "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
very intresting and differant. i like  True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
pause the film and start it over from middle of the film the beginning is in the past and the ending is in the future now is the only time we need play it forward frame by frame one frame at a time in a mystic ancient rhyme frame by frame goes slowly by lose the rhythm and it fly close your eyes and live your dream instead of watching from the seats ain't it funny how life changes with the advent of something new at how life colors from something blue as it grows with some thing old and comforts with something borrowed so borrow me my dear though I'm new I'll try to make the sunshine bright and break the clouds on through and though I'm old do not despair I'll be there anytime, anyplace, anywhere |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Ok, first I read Saxoness's, and thought 'Coolers...pretty good imagery there.' Then I read Desperado's reply, and thought 'Oh whoa....they should collaborate' Singly, both are great, but together, phantasmally splendid. And that's all I have to say about that.  Alicat the Persnikitty “It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most intelligent, but the one most responsive to change.” Charles Darwin |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed it is. . . but yet, we'd do it again wouldn't we?? superb Saxoness. . . and I liked your response as well desperado. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Yeah, it is pretty neat how they go together, isn't it  "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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