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Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27
Posts 222
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-02-12 12:11 PM


~This is a short thingy (not really a poem)  I haven't written in a VERY long time.  I'm quite disappointed in myself.  I moved away to college and unfortunately have been faced with writer's block BIG TIME!  Perhaps it's stress but writing has always been my chosen outlet and I miss it dearly.  Please help me to break it.  I'm afraid this is the best I can do.  And it's not even a poem!

        
           They say you should seize the day.
      They say you should seize your dream.
         Stop, take time to learn new things.
      You should live life how you want.
         Make choices you want to make.
      Do the things you want to do.
         Only to please one person~
      You!  

Any help is welcome!  


© Copyright 2001 Chelsea Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2001-02-12 06:26 PM


It may not be a poem to you but, to me it is and it's a good poem.....I suggest you should try one of those challenges Passions has or do what I do,  write topics or titles of future poem,  think of a concept, think of the first rhymes or rhymes in general to go with it......or even try to pray or meditate....I tried all these a couple of times and they seem to work and if those don't work eventually you're creativity will come back to you....heck it might already be there...you probaly got to pick the right thing to write.....I hope that my advice was helpful,  if not,  I apologize for even suggesting....anyways wonderful piece and take care!

Nathan

Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27
Posts 222
IL, USA
2 posted 2001-02-12 07:28 PM


Thank you for your advice Nathan.  I will try your suggestions and I am glad that you think that was still good.  Thank you again.  Good luck in writing.
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