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Cherry Lips
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Cherry Lips |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
your cherry lips puckered for me opening my eyes for you to see how much I care if you freeze that moment of my stare into your heart revealing my love that nothing can part but every touch I miss until you return with a kiss is the feeling you sparked warming my heart of the joy we embarked a beginning of love in the first kiss of your lips opening my eyes above to see your face full of life like an angel with grace from all the things we feel which proves our love is real |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Rhythmic and sweet. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
into your heart revealing my love that nothing can part but every touch I miss until you return with a kiss ================ look at you..clever poetbug... Im digging your same line rhyme here ... and me thinks with this romantic write.. you are a lovebug  way cool poem...way cool title. cherry is me fav flave later-hotlip-gator jm Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I can feel the truth in these words - written with a tender heart. Thanks for the read, Insect  K- it was not an unmusical sound: long, falling, half a sigh, like wind in the wires, or a train distancing. The Muse of Distance, A. Williamson |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a tender piece you penned here, loved reading these lovely words of love. Charisma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
insect - this is just darling, I liked it very much. BC |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Lovely piece...I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme cadence....wonderful poem! Nathan |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
into your heart revealing my love that nothing can part but every touch I miss until you return with a kiss' Very romantic write, insect! Great rhythm too! I love it!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
sorry i’ve been a busy bug lately! VAS thank you happy you enjoyed the read and so nice that you seem to show in my replies often! Janet Marie thanks Ja your romantic butterfly’s are always welcome you can call me hotlips anytime with a cherry on top! Ha! and add whatever fruit u like when you say…ok! u caught me in your net…Ja! i mean Ja with a net! you know Janet! Severn thank you i’m pleased to have you in my replies! Charisma thank you you always make me smile replying in my poems! Bill Charles happy you dropped in to say! thank you Nate Dogg glad you enjoyed thanks very much! snowpants love those bouncing faces! thank you |
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