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Me doesn't have no need for grammar...
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Me doesn't have no need for grammar... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Me doesn’t have no need for grammar, mine sentences are fine as is! I has no dreams for written glamour,-- it dreams of having lips her kiss. To have survived tomorrow evening, the heart of her’s would be enough, but now, alone, she, him, is leaving, and one was left, alas, in love. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Nope, you really don't need proper grammar to describe the feelings here. Great write!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Master, you write poetry good me read like!!! poem this read good feelings too all familiar!!  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mee too either. ( ~ cute ~ ) ClaireCould a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... Me thanks you for the grins. *G* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
great write...just love this...and hey can i just ditto suthern's bad grammar and thank you too? |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Interesting mix of topics here - or rather, using the grammar topic to highlight the other... I like!  K...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
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