talking nights [ remembering Amber's poetry ]

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Open Poetry #12

talking nights [ remembering Amber's poetry ]

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2001-02-11 03:58 PM

I heard you talking in

your sleep is there something I
can do I don't believe we've had a
word today 'bout anything but bleu I
heard you cooing in the night, yeah
that's right I heard ya call though
I hardly heard the games you
spoke in tones of limerick
I vaguely heard her
name and as I

thought
I don't
recall
if true
but I was
sure I thought
you whispered softly I
reached to hold you near
but you turned away and
viewing your lips came
such secrets I
wasn’t

supposed
to hear and
any way it
was so
quick
you
must
of known

I missed
it but I’m sure I
heard you whimper
in a dream last night
so what exactly am

I supposed
to do
?
.

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 02-11-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-02-11 04:17 PM

Lucky~
I know what you mean - I've missed her too.
How's about dropping her a note ?
This is just another sweet side of you.
She would love to know that you heard.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

2 posted 2001-02-11 04:32 PM

Marge,

Thank you... and I'd do that... but her and her sister have both the same address... and I'd feel that Devina might be hurt from it in some way... I like her poetry as well... but today I had been looking at Amber's, and that is why I wrote this in her manner. They are both so very talented and I do miss them both... I hope to be reading their works some day, Their just tooooo good to go to waste.

dale
.

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-02-12 11:30 PM

Dale--what a sweet way to say I miss your poetic voice...of course, you are a sweet man.

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