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Gray Moods........Tanka
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Gray Moods........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Gray Moods Gravity of clouds draws a song within gray moods teardrops falling down leaves a trace of shattered light gentle waves will soothe my mind Charisma ~TMP~ 11/02/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahh. . . this reads wonderfully. . . excellent my friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely!! May we use it in an upcoming issue of the newsletter? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a wonderful composition once again! Good stuff! |
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gardawg Junior Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 34W of Seattle |
Charisma, the finest form and a fine poem. Thanks. Gary |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma....you suit your name.....and Tanka suits your talents.....this is wonderful! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is just a lovely tanka Take care, Melissa~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven: thank you for the excellent my friend Poet deVine: off course you may use it for the newsletter, its my pleasure and I am very honored with that. ethome: thank you for your always wonderful comment. gardawg: thank you, and yes it is a great form, I love to do this form Sunshine: thank you my friend for the wonderful, I am glad that you liked it. Melissa: thank you for the lovely....always glad to know that you enjoy them. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma-A Soothing tanka to read today. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such beautiful words from you my friend. Love those gray moods when they come at the right time. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
poeminister: thank you for the beautiful, and glad that you liked these soothing tanka Mark: thank you for your lovely comment....always great to have some from you my friend as I appreciatie it very much |
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