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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She said she was infatuated with infidelity. I said I was interested in invincibility. Needless to say, we were both miserable. Our relationship dissolved like cedar smoke becoming one color in the deepening twilight. Needless to say, it wasn’t as beautiful as that. I wrote a letter saying I never want to see her again. Later, I wrote four asking if she would still be my friend. Needless to say, I spent my savings on stamps. I found a new girl out of an old friend’s love. I hope the old have found someone too. Needless to say, whatever; who cares. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Needless to say, we were both miserable. Our relationship dissolved like cedar smoke becoming one color in the deepening twilight. Needless to say, it wasn’t as beautiful as that. =============== Later, I wrote four asking if she would still be my friend. ================== I found a new girl out of an old friend’s love. ================== Needless to say, whatever; who cares. ================== my goodness someones moody muse is complacently cranky today  you write it...I feel it... which is very cool my gifted squirrel poet love that second verse very cool write Mike, and nice to see you here today  Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'I wrote a letter saying I never wanted to see her again/Later I wrote four asking if she would still be my friend'. Good to know there are other minds like mine. Enjoyed this much. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Liking this...liking this a lot! It has that subtle minimalistic tone I just adore... great write b  K- it was not an unmusical sound: long, falling, half a sigh, like wind in the wires, or a train distancing. The Muse of Distance, A. Williamson |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks everyone. And Butterfly Slippers, it wasn't crankiness, just me poking fun at emotional excess. Glad everyone enjoyed.Mike |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Poking fun or not,...I enjoyed the way this read. Much so! Thank you. *Peace. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I wrote a letter saying I never want to see her again. Later, I wrote four asking if she would still be my friend. Needless to say, I spent my savings on stamps." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ like this a lot Mike.... SEA |
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