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Together Once More
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Together Once More |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TOGETHER ONCE MORE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When I returned to ‘Deep Bay’, it was so very real, calm and serene, had been blessed by the Lord… It still is an enchanted island, never to be forgotten, and all it’s lovely natural beauty, inside I have adored… I truly needed to find you, as I have been haunted, by your memories, and the closeness we once shared… I never said to you, how deeply you had touched me, but I do vow if I find you, my emotions to you will be bared… When I arrived and searched, and found you there, my lonely lips touched yours, in a loving embrace… And we cried about the happiness, almost lost, something that was very precious, but no more had to chase… Yes, ‘Deep Bay’ is one very enthralling place, it has healed two lonely hearts, magical to be sure… When they were, happiness was no longer fleeing, and we now know for certain, that it’s you and I………., you and I………., “Together Once More”… ~~~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I never said to you, how deeply you had touched me, but I do vow if I find you, my emotions to you will be bared… you are making me fall in love with "Deep Bay" and I have never even been there.... ~Smiles~ ~Wynter/Moonchild.......must be those words I am sinking into "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... This is lovely......I wish for you a journey back to your Deep Bay..... ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Lovely sequel to your other writing. Deep Bay sounds like a wonderful place. I wish you well. Ariana |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This was so romantic and lovely! Oh, you speak of such love here from your beautiful heart! Oh, how I would love to come up to Deep bay soon! That place must be gorgeous! (sigh) Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're compiling a wonderfully romantic anthology, my friend... You can call it... um... "Around the Lighthouse at Deep Bay"... Wonderful work, BCI.... again..  Waft every crest upon your destined sea. Embrace the Wave of Serendipity, Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - A'hhh my dear, but if you were to see this magic place, you would be in love. I can guarantee it. Sunny - thank you Sunny, for your always kind words for my writings. And I will be going back there. Ariana - It is a wonderful place, and I do wish to return. Thank you for your kind reply. Mistletoe Angel - I must thank you for your most gracious reply to this writing. It is a sequel to another that I posted, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you again. Nan - thank you so much for this reply. And yes, perhaps I should have called it, 'Around The Lighthouse At Deep Bay'. Now why do those words sound familiar, I wonder. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, you've been successful in making everyone want to go to this special place. *sigh* Great writing Bill  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhtDove - It is the magical place that I have written about, and will return. I find it truly amazing that one place such as this, can leave an impression, as this place has done to me. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we all have that one place that will on in our memories. . . thanks for sharing Bill. . . this is excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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