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Finally over you!!
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Finally over you!! |
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pixiechild Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35 |
I miss what we had and it actually makes me sad but I hope in my heart I'll find it again someday with someone who makes me feel special in every way Why is it so strange to me, that I can't forget what we used to be? You were so nice at first and after a while of being together I felt cursed, cursed of getting a broken heart and to get me and u far apart Maybe it's better now in what way and how I don't know but for the reason u left I find low never expected to hear that from u though I know the words aren't true seems like I was wrong from the beginning for so long Oh well I'll survive and I know I can move on with my life but as for u I feel sorry luckly I don't have to worry, cause my problem you'll never be again you're enough to make someone go insane!!! no wonder people think I'm slightly mad cause being with you can be bad although I enjoyed some of the things we did together that made me thought it would last forever Hope you can be as happy as me someday, cause I think I found what we had in a way Now it would be true if I say I'm finally over you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The wonders of poetry! What a wonderful way to get it all out and purge the soul and you did this very well here ....I enjoyed reading this very much! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Ah yes the cathartic nature of the written word- especially in the relatively free formats of the poetic world. Write to release, to see. "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Feel the strength in your own words...and use it! Great descriptive emotions. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent!! It's the getting there that's hard. . . but when we do. . . great writing!!! -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'luckly I don't have to worry, cause my problem you'll never be again you're enough to make someone go insane!!! no wonder people think I'm slightly mad cause being with you can be bad' Ahh, yes, pix...do I ever know this one! Great write!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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