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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-02-10 03:17 PM



Pieces of Heaven
Falling from the sky
Pieces of heaven
For only you and I

Pieces of Heaven
In soft gentle flake
White cold beauty
Only Heaven could make

Pieces of Heaven
Time for me to go play
It's snowing like crazy
Computer's off the rest of the day!!


2-10-01
12:12 pm

~SEA~

* My family is out playing in the heavy snow fall……….I love you all, but it's time to go play!!

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-10 03:27 PM


SEA....go child go!

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2 posted 2001-02-10 06:39 PM


SEA~
When the snowfall is over
and you are frozen through and through
You can return to the friendship hearth
found here on pages blue

*You're just a snow-angel in disguise !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-02-10 06:49 PM



This was delightful with a great flow!  Make a snowman for me!

Take care,
Melissa~

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4 posted 2001-02-10 06:53 PM


Can I come over....oh my love to play in the snow too....



see....I do love playing with snow......

Charisma

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5 posted 2001-02-10 07:27 PM


AAh now ours is all just melting away
but you have fun and now go play
we will be here when you return
and maybe tomorrow it will be my turn!!

Hope you enjoyed your day Sea, well written.
Hugs.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith


Elizabeth
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6 posted 2001-02-11 11:36 AM


It's a pain, but a FUN pain. Know what I mean?  
Sunnyone
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7 posted 2001-02-11 11:48 AM


I love this one!!! And I don't even mind shoveling the driveway!!! Something about snow is so magical, even way up here where you get HUGE ammounts every year......great fun write here, now I must go shovel!!


~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~
it's later than you think!




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8 posted 2001-02-11 01:23 PM


Just as the snow you now enjoy, we are treated to a piece of heaven every time you post and reply.  Have fun, play hard, and make snow angels softly.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Poeminister
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9 posted 2001-02-11 03:59 PM


Love it.  I could play in the snow all day.

Poeminister

Nate Dogg
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10 posted 2001-02-12 06:12 PM


A soft and loving piece Sea....it snowed here in Atlanta like a month or two ago....I think I love looking at the way the snow blankets the ground,  catching snowflakes on my tongue and throwing snow balls at people.....anyways loved the poem...it's wonderful!

Nathan

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11 posted 2001-02-12 06:53 PM


SEA - let it snow, let it snow, and let your pen write many more like this one.

BC

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12 posted 2001-02-12 09:24 PM


SEA, I love you but if snow is pieces of heaven, I'm hell-bound for sure!
    

vandana
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13 posted 2001-02-13 11:02 AM


enjoy the read
PoeticKnight
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14 posted 2001-02-13 11:25 AM


I wish it would snow one day. It has been since 1989, and even then it was only a couple inches.
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15 posted 2001-02-13 11:27 AM


snow in Texas hmmmm (scratching head) oh there it is hahahaha

You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!


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