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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-02-10 02:52 PM


Wrote this Tanka for Sunshine,will her warm reflection of friendship always cover these blue pages. Thanks Karilea for your wonderful and warm friendship.



Golden Reflection

Within warm embrace
Of sunshine's tender sunbeams
Whispers of romance
Golden reflection of love
Evokes amiable sense


Charisma

~TMP~
10/02/01


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SEA
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1 posted 2001-02-10 02:58 PM


Charisma~ yes, Sunshine is always warm and kind........

you are so sweet for doing these!   very nice!!  SEA

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2 posted 2001-02-10 03:35 PM


Oh Charisma...how lovely...it is truly overwhelming...thank you! Both you and this poem are going into my library...

and please know, the smile you made today will glow far into the night...

thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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3 posted 2001-02-10 04:06 PM


Sea: yes she is a warm and kind person, and it was my pleasure to write these Tanka for Sunshine.

Sunshine: I am very happy that you liked the poem....and it is me that have to say "thank you for your warm friendship".......because that means a lot for me, more than I ever can say in words.

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4 posted 2001-02-10 04:17 PM


Charisma~
The sheer beauty of this piece is reflective of your talent.

Love seeing my two friends in this one.
You BOTH shine in warmth and love.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2001-02-10 05:30 PM


You have captured her.  Lovely tribute.  

Poeminister

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And let the face of God shine through."
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6 posted 2001-02-10 08:05 PM


Marge: thank you my dear friend for your lovely comment and warm compliment, and I am glad that you liked it.....

poeminister: thank you for your lovely reply

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7 posted 2001-02-11 01:37 AM


Ahh, Charisma....you're so sweet and considerate....you're a very good writer too..loved the poem and the graphic...it's very beautiful.

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-02-11 01:52 AM


gorgeous  words  ~S~  very nicely done, Charisma

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9 posted 2001-02-11 03:01 AM


Charis~
What a beautiful tanka for sunshine...great write hon
~HUGS~
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
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10 posted 2001-02-11 06:44 AM


Ah, I really love this one and it's for such a great poet and person...good job!

Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination!

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